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	<title>Comments on: How to Build the Best Blue Jay of All-Time</title>
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		<title>By: pennymaster</title>
		<link>http://toronto.locals.baseballprospectus.com/2017/12/28/how-to-build-the-perfect-blue-jay/#comment-78299</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[pennymaster]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 30 Dec 2017 03:28:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Be more willing to assess criticism, even when it’s as pointed as mine. I apologize if it offended you; I’m harsher on the more talented ones. Were you a brutal writer, I wouldn’t have said a word. I suggest in the future to humbly ask yourself if there may be a grain of truth in the rebuke that can make you a better writer. Defensive reactions such as yours won’t make you a better storyteller.  

Moreover, publicly criticizing a commenter’s comprehension would never fly in any mainstream newsroom. To be avoided. Future employers that search the web for your work may not be impressed by your reaction yesterday. If my critique of your work is meritless, that will be clear because the writing will stand for itself.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Be more willing to assess criticism, even when it’s as pointed as mine. I apologize if it offended you; I’m harsher on the more talented ones. Were you a brutal writer, I wouldn’t have said a word. I suggest in the future to humbly ask yourself if there may be a grain of truth in the rebuke that can make you a better writer. Defensive reactions such as yours won’t make you a better storyteller.  </p>
<p>Moreover, publicly criticizing a commenter’s comprehension would never fly in any mainstream newsroom. To be avoided. Future employers that search the web for your work may not be impressed by your reaction yesterday. If my critique of your work is meritless, that will be clear because the writing will stand for itself.</p>
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		<title>By: pennymaster</title>
		<link>http://toronto.locals.baseballprospectus.com/2017/12/28/how-to-build-the-perfect-blue-jay/#comment-78250</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[pennymaster]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Dec 2017 23:39:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Submit it to any mainstream newsroom editor and see what they say.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Submit it to any mainstream newsroom editor and see what they say.</p>
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		<title>By: DXpwns</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[DXpwns]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Dec 2017 18:11:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Nice article, but when you wrote “Angels land both Shohei Otani and Jarred Cos-”, I think you meant to say Otani and Kinser or Zach Cozart?]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice article, but when you wrote “Angels land both Shohei Otani and Jarred Cos-”, I think you meant to say Otani and Kinser or Zach Cozart?</p>
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		<title>By: Richard Lee-Sam</title>
		<link>http://toronto.locals.baseballprospectus.com/2017/12/28/how-to-build-the-perfect-blue-jay/#comment-78240</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Richard Lee-Sam]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Dec 2017 17:42:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[It took you ten paragraphs to realize that? That&#039;s more of a reading comprehension problem than a writer problem.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It took you ten paragraphs to realize that? That&#8217;s more of a reading comprehension problem than a writer problem.</p>
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		<title>By: masterpenny</title>
		<link>http://toronto.locals.baseballprospectus.com/2017/12/28/how-to-build-the-perfect-blue-jay/#comment-78233</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[masterpenny]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Dec 2017 14:06:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[It wasn&#039;t clear that this was a farce-article until the 10th paragraph or so. That&#039;s bad writing for that reason alone. It made me think that Mr. Sam-Lee actually had obtained the rare kind of heightened access in which decision-makers reveal their unvarnished candid thoughts/feelings.  Just a sentence could have prevented the 2 worst things a writer can do:  confuse the reader and cause future mistrust.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It wasn&#8217;t clear that this was a farce-article until the 10th paragraph or so. That&#8217;s bad writing for that reason alone. It made me think that Mr. Sam-Lee actually had obtained the rare kind of heightened access in which decision-makers reveal their unvarnished candid thoughts/feelings.  Just a sentence could have prevented the 2 worst things a writer can do:  confuse the reader and cause future mistrust.</p>
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